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BRYSON: Well, Amina, thanks for letting me have your draft in such good time.
AMINA: Oh, that’s alright. I was just very anxious to hear what you think of it. You can
         see that I decided to change the topic - I had been interested in looking at
         Barings Factory.
BRYSON: Oh, I think the hospital was a much better choice. In fact.., well... I have to    【Q21】
         say that I thought it was good.
AMINA: Oh?
BRYSON: There’s still lots of work to be done...
AMINA: Oh yes.., of course.
BRYSON: But there’s plenty of good ideas. It opens well and the first chapter is fine but
          the middle section really stood out for me... most interesting.                      【Q22】
AMNA:  That’s amazing because I really didn’t find it a bit easy to write...                 【Q23】
BRYSON: How long did you work on the whole thing?
AMINA: Well, I spent about two or three weeks reading and doing general research and
        then I dashed the writing off very quickly.., so about four weeks in all.
BRYSON: Well, that’s about par for the course. You’ve got a while yet to make the changes.
AMINA: Oh right.., no problem...
BRYSON: Right. Let’s have a look at my notes here. OK. Starting with section headings
          …. the broad divisions are good but you’ll have to re-do the actual headings.     Example
          I’ve made some suggestions in the margins...
AMINA: OK. Thanks.
BRYSON: Now, this information on local housing... I can see why you put it there but it    【Q24】
          really isn’t relevant to the approach you’ve taken.
AMINA: I think I see what you mean.
BRYSON: Now... what did I say about the interviews?
AMNA: I worked very hard on those. I really thought they were valuable.
BRYSON: They are, Amina, but they’re very complex and rather unclear at the moment.
         You’re going to have to spend a bit of time making the data a lot clearer.          【Q25】
AMINA: OK... as long as I don’t have to remove them altogether...
BRYSON: No, don’t worry.
AMINA: What about the chronology.., the list of dates? I wasn’t sure whether I should
         rewrite those.
BRYSON: My advice on that is to take them out. I feel it makes the whole piece appear      【Q26】
         too simplistic.
AMINA: OK, if it’ll help.
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BRSON: Now, there are a couple of other books I’d like you to look at. Have you got a
         pen? Right... Approaches to Local History by John Mervis...
AMINA:    Right...
BRYSON: And then I think you need to think about ways of representing interview data.
          Have a look at Sight and Sound by Kate Oakwell.                                      【Q27】
AMINA: Sight and Sound.
BRYSON: Then you know I’m going away on holiday next week...
AMINA: Yes.
BRYSON: So when you’ve made the changes I suggest you show the work to your            【Q28】
          Support Tutor.
AMINA: Support Tutor... right...
BRYSON: Then you do the proof reading...                                                  【Q29】
AMINA: Proof reading.., uh-huh. When by, do you think?
BRYSON: I’d aim for 29 June and after that you should get it laser printed.., but be        【Q30】
         careful because the computer centre closes on 10 July.
AMINA: And then I hand it in to... ?
BRYSON: Oh, the Faculty Office as usual.
AMINA: OK, that’s fine. I think I’m all set now! Thanks very much for all your help.
BRYSON: A pleasure. See you when I get back.
AMINA: Yep. Thanks, Dr Bryson. Bye.
BRYSON: Bye