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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Good R

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Good R

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Good Relationship Between Teacher and Students. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:
    1. 良好的师生关系对教学很重要
    2．建立良好师生关系的途径
    3．作为一名大学生应该怎么做
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答案             Good Relationship Between Teacher and Students
    A good relationship between teacher and students is essential to teaching and learning. It has a positive influence on both sides.  A gad teacher-student relationship makes learning enjoyable and teaching worthwhile. If the relationship is not pleasant, it can discourage the students from learning and make teaching a boring task.
    The ideal relationship depends on the mutual efforts of both sides. on the one hand, it is important that students should respect their teacher. Don’t talk in the classroom when attending a lecture. Listening to the teacher attentively is invariably a way to show politeness to the teacher. on the other hand, the teacher should be responsible for teaching and be ready to help any student in need. Partiality and prejudice may hurt some students while kindness, patience and justice are recommendable to every student. In actual fact, both respect and understanding lead to harmonious relationship.
    It seems that good relationship between the teacher and a college student is difficult to maintain. But it’s not necessarily the case. Making friends with his teachers, I believe, is one of the effective way of improving the teacher-student relationship. Also, taking study as his key task may avoid many bad manners which greatly contribute to bad teacher-student relationship.
解析     用词亮点：(1) 在第一段首句中，essential意思为“基本的；重要的”，说明某事物的重要性，相当于important， fundamental等。(2) 第二段第四句中，invariably意思为“总是”，起强调作用，类似于always，constantly等。 (3) 第二段尾句中，In actual fact意思为“事实上”，起强调作用。类似表达法有In fact，Actually， Virtually等。
    句式亮点：(1) 第一段首句利用If引导的条件状语从句进行推论。(2) 第二段倒数第二句中while意思为“而”，表示对照关系，起强调作用，相当于but，whereas，yet，and yet等。(3) 第三段第三句中I believe意思为“我认为”，利用插入成分使句型富有变化。
    篇章亮点：(1) 第二段首句利用“…depends on the mutual efforts of both sides”的结构引出某一事物的两个方面。(2) 第二段首句之后使用了“on the one hand，…on the other hand，…”表示列举的结构。(3) 第三段前两句中“It seems that…But it’s not necessarily the case”是一个表示推论的结构，值得模仿。
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