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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Should We Keep Animals as Pets? You should write at least 120 words following the outline given below.
    1．有些人认为养宠物益处多
    2．有些人认为养宠物害处多
    3．你的看法是……
              Should We Keep Animals as Pets?
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答案                   Should We Keep Animals as Pets?
    ①When it comes to keeping animals as pets, different people hold different opinions. Some people take it for granted that it has many advantages. On the one hand, they believe animals can bring happiness to them. On the other hand, they find that they themselves become more patient and considerate by raising animal pets.
    ②However, other people think that keeping animals as pets has a lot of disadvantages. In their opinion, it will cost them much more time and money than growing flowers. Besides, sometimes uncontrollable animal pets may annoy them or even their neighbors, thus disturb the harmony among people.
    ③As to me, I agree with the second view. As a student, I’m occupied in studying, therefore spare no time taking care of troublesome animal pets.
解析     ①审题及布局。本文是一篇论说文。从文章的提示要求上看，人们对待养宠物持有不同的观点，首先应该从两方面分析养宠物的利与弊，最后表明自己的看法：支持还是不支持。在布局上，根据题目中给出的提纲来展开即可。第一段阐述有些人认为养宠物益处多；第二段阐述有些人认为养宠物害处多；第三段陈述自己对这一现象的看法。②语言。通过分析养宠物的利弊，提出自己的看法。所以论述要层次分明，理由充足，具有说服力，词汇选择要精确，句式要丰富。时态上选择一般现在时即可。
    ①开宗明义，指出人们对养宠物观点不一。首先提出观点一：养宠物益处多，并陈述两个理由：宠物给人带来欢乐，通过养宠物人们变得更体贴，更有耐心。take it for granted“想当然”和 On the one hand…On the other hand…“一方面……另一方面”都是高分表达。
    ②这一部分具体论述有人认为养宠物害处多，采用总分结构，陈述了两个理由：养宠物须花时间花钱，不好控制的宠物有时给人们带来烦恼，影响人际关系。However，Besides的使用使行文层次更清楚，disturb the harmony among people“破坏人们之间的和谐”是高分表达，为文章增色不少。
    ③表明自己的观点：同意后者。作为学生，自己忙于功课，无暇照顾给人添麻烦的宠物。 I’m occupied in studying“忙着学习”，spare no time taking care of“无暇照顾”也是高分表达。
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