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  3. •Read part of a fax below from Gerald Davis, a colleague in the London office of

•Read part of a fax below from Gerald Davis, a colleague in the London office of

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问题 •Read part of a fax below from Gerald Davis, a colleague in the London office of your company.
As you know, we regularly use the Station Hotel in London for business meetings. However, some clients have recently complained about the business facilities at the hotel. We would be grateful if you could give us your opinion.
For your next visit on 28th August, would you prefer to stay there or at another hotel? In addition, would you like us to arrange a company car from the airport?
•Write a fax to Gerald Davis:
•giving your opinion of the Station Hotel
•comparing its business facilities with another hotel
•saying which hotel you would prefer in August
•accepting the company car.
•Write 60-80 words on your Answer Sheet.
•Do not include any postal addresses.
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答案 Dear Mr Davis.
     Thank you for your fax. I’m very pleased to stay in your hotel. The service in your hotel is very good. But the business facilites, in the hotel are: less professional than others;: And some equipment is in shortage. But I think it still as room for improvements.
This time I am going to stay in Great Hotel in the city centre due to the venue of the conference is in downtown.
   And I will accept the company car you offered. I am looking forward to see you.
                                                                                Yours faithfully.
                                                                                Weija Chang
Band 2
From the candidate’s answer, it is clear that s/he did not fully understand the task, so despite reasonable language control and a range of appropriate expressions and suitable register, the reader would be confused as to the purpose of the fax. Consequently, a higher mark could not be awarded.
Sample D
Dear Mr Davis
     Im reference to your fax, the Sation Hotel is not bad, but the Palace Hotel is better. The problem of the Station Hotel is that the conference room is too small and there aren’t enough suports to do a presentation. Also the staff is rude.
The Palace Hotel is more for business people and they have a great conferance room.
It would be fantastic if a company car can pick up me at the airport on the 28th August. At the time I’ll arrive it’s difficult to find taxis.
Thank you very much
                                                                            Yours Sincerelly
                                                                                   BH
Band 5
All the content points are clearly covered, and effective use is made of a good range of grammar and vocabulary. There are a number of minor errors, but these do not impede the communication of the message.
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