Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay ent

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问题 Directions: For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled Say No to Drunk Driving. You should write at least 150 words following the outline given below.
1. 众所周知，酒后驾车十分危险
2．但近年来越来越多的人酒后驾车．原因是……
3．我认为……
Say No to Drunk Driving

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答案 Say No to Drunk Driving
[1] As is known to all, drunk driving is very dangerous. [2] It puts to risks not only the driver’s life but also those of other innocent people.
[3] Dangerous as it is, there have bee

解析本文要求对酒醉驾驶的原因进行分析，并提出门己的看法。如果要求分析酒醉驾驶的不良后果，那就容易点，可 outline要求分析酒醉驾驶的原因，许多考生可能绞尽脑汁也不知道该说什么好了。
范文从两个角度分析原因：首先，经济上富裕了，开车的人更多了；其次，司机主观上对自己的驾驶技术太过门信。这两条都很好，与醉驾密切相关，很有说服力。
是否还有别的原因呢?——无酒不成宴的传统习惯勺现代生活不合拍；法律上对醉驾处罚力度不够；酒席上人们的自控能力太差；等等。读者可以自己尽情展开自己的思路，写出好文章来。
最后还要说明“我认为”，当然要与标题Say No的看法—致了。但要注意如何表达。
Analysis
[1] 由outline改写而来，得来毫不费功夫。
[2] 是[1]的支持句，put sth to danger/risks是较好的搭配。
[3] 还是描写现象。其中暗含这种现象的存在原因，于是下文就可以就这些原因进行分析。注意这句话与前一段话之间有转折关系，用了让步结构。
[4] [5] one reason is that；another reason is that…，衔接自然。
[6] 注意tall victim to的用法
[7] 是作文标题的再现!主题句。
[8] 怎样say no呢?再提—下具体措施，文章就更加有力度了。也是[7]的支持/扩展句。

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