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  3. For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled What M

For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled What M

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a short essay entitled What Makes a Genius by commenting on Thomas Edison’s famous remark, "Genius is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration. " You should write at least 150 "words but no more than 200 words.
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答案     What Makes a Genius
    Thomas Edison coined the world’s most inspiring idea—Genius is 1% inspiration and 99% perspiration. It is not unusual to notice that someone who is endowed with talents is reduced to mediocrity, while some others without any natural gift rank among the great geniuses. So what makes a genius?
    I am a firm believer in Edison’s remark. It is perspiration that makes a person become a talent and Thomas Edison himself is a wonderful example to illustrate this point. Edison was once identified as a mentally retarded student and deprived of being educated at school. However, with tremendous efforts, he was listed as the top inventor, with no one outstripping him in the kingdom of invention.
    In a word, despite the fact that inspiration is to a genius what motor is to an auto, industry matters a great deal for a person to be successful. Today’s world allocates us everything to improve ourselves, to set our goals, to walk on our determined path, and to reach our enlightened destiny; however, without industry and painstaking efforts, everything will be in vain.
解析     本文要求考生在评述爱迪生的名言“天才是1％的灵感加上99％的汗水”的基础上阐述成功的关键是什么。爱迪生的名言表明“汗水”是成功的关键，由此，考生可确定“勤奋、脚踏实地”为本文的核心内容。第一段首先引入并评析爱迪生的名言，第二段可通过具体事例证明勤奋的重要性，第三段总结全文或从反面论证勤奋的重要性。本文要求考生写出一篇议论文，具体阐述成功的关键因素。除了使用亮点词汇和复杂长句外，考生应注意句子之间的衔接和连贯，使用连词等衔接手段。论证观点时要注意句子之间的逻辑关系，做到观点明确。
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