For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic "T

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问题 For this part, you are allowed 30 minutes to write a composition on the topic "The Gradual Loss of Social Morality". You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words which should cover:
1)describing the meaning of cartoon briefly:
2)stating its main idea:
3)giving your comment.

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答案     The Gradual Loss of Social Morality(1)From the cartoon given above, we can observe that when seeing that an elder man is getting on the bus that is crowded, the old man beside the seat just stands up instantly, saying " please have a seat here",(2)which form a distinct comparison with the behavior of all of the others around who are young and healthy but(3)show no intention of giving seats to the old and infirm man.
     (4)The cartoon aims at informing us of the phenomenon of the gradual loss of social morality.(5)For one thing, there’ re quite a few people becoming selfish and egocentric. When putting self-interest in the first place, they tend to overlook others’ benefit or feelings and become nonchalant. Moreover, this phenomenon can also(6)be attributed to people’s concern that their social morality will sometimes result in unnecessary trouble.
    However,(7)no one can deny the importance of social morality. People equipped with the awareness of social morality are more likely to provide others with a helping hand,(8)which is conducive to the harmony of society. We should adopt some measures to reverse the current situation.

解析 (1)From the cartoon given above,we can observe that意为“从上述的卡通图片,我们可以观察到”,是看图作文的经典开头,文章开头便描述从图中观察到了什么,紧贴提纲行文。
(2)which form a distinct comparison with意为“形成了鲜明的对比”。此处用非限制性定语从句将图画描述得更加具体。
(3)show no intention of doing sth.意为“没有意向做某事”。
(4)aim at doing sth.意为“旨在做某事”,这句话揭示了图片的深层次含义,即告诉了我们社会公德正在逐渐缺失。
(5)For one thing,Moreover分条列举公德缺失的原因,极富条理性。
(6)be attributed to意为“归结于”。
(7)这句话揭示了社会公德的重要性,将文章内容升华。
(8)which引导定语从句,be conducive to意为“有利于”。
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